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Analysis of Commercial

Commercial URL: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4jmV4jw_Ic Hook: All of us understand that mid-day slump where you just want to take a nap, but have a lot of work that needs to get finished. You could grab a coffee, red bull, monster, OR you can cure that exhaustion with a 5 hour energy. Thesis: The purpose of this 5 Hour Energy commercial is to relate to the audience effectively enough to increase their profits. Examples of Relativity to Audience: 1. Using the battery level icon to display people's energy level Almost everyone has a smartphone nowadays and can imagine seeing people with low battery percentages. Appeals to logos of audience and getting tired during the day 2. Showing people in familiar atmosphere's doing everyday jobs and activities Gentleman in the city walking into an office building Construction worker yawning on the worksite Mom dropping her kids off at Tae Kwon Doe  Man stretching before a run         -Shows them all...
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Major Assignment 1 Feedback

1. The most challenging parts of this assignment were using the specific quotes in the right way and writing in APA format. In future reference to help with this, we could see how quotes are used and how they are explained in professional text. Also, writing in APA is difficult, although we had examples of this in class, and it was tough to use for my paper. 2. Analyzing sample paper was the most helpful. It showed me examples, good or bad, and allowed me to see what I could add or take away from my paper. It also helped with seeing in-text citations and the style that certain writers used.
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Ranking the Example Papers

1. Writing as a Creative Writer            Strengths: good organization, strong introduction, good explanation of academic writing            Weaknesses: some of the citations were incorrectly done 2. Role of Writing in Engineering            Strengths: clear statements, excellent word choice, used APA correctly            weaknesses: headers on paragraphs were misleading, didn't divide by academic and non-academic writing 3. Writing in Business Discipline             Strengths: used special formulas, strong conclusion, clear statements             weakness: used acronyms that were not explained,  not enough sources for the paper 4. Writing in the Field of Economics             Strengths: clear statements, correct in text citation          ...
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Minor Assignment for Wed, Aug 22

The first major assignment asks us to conduct an analytical report of how writing is used in our specific field. We must interview an individual in our field on how they use writing for their profession and how they have come to do so. Also, the assignment asks us to find/use three academic and three non academic sources to further explain how writing is used in our field. Incorporating our findings from the interview and the six sources, the report should contain a thesis backed by an explanation and citation. We will use AATP to format the structure, language, and references of our specific reports. 1. Are the three academic/non-academic sources going to be used against each other or with each other to prove our thesis? 2. What type of genre will this assignment be? 3. How to structure the entire report using the interview and 6 sources?
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